Tense

I have a bad habit. It has to do with tenses and run-ons. I'm aware of these failings in my writing and with every edit I catch more and change them. Sometimes though, it's just easier to change tenses (past to present and back again) because that's how my mind operates.

So mind the dust as I'm working work on it. Damn people, judging me with your judgey judge eyes. You think I can't hear your thoughts?

P.S. I know you just ate that cookie and you should feel guilty about it because cellulite isn't cute on anyone. How do you like that little piece of judgement.